The Elegies express Rilke's belief that the role of artistic expression is to bridge the gap between the higher order of invisible reality and the perceptible "Things" of the human world. In the First and Ninth Elegies, the artist bridges the gap between the human and divine by simply paying attention to the springtimes, stars, waves, songs, and other Things that are waiting to be "noticed." Once these Things are "noticed," the artist expresses them in ways that connect us to immortality and ultimately comfort us. The First Elegy thus concludes with the scene of a funeral, where the void felt by the mourners is pierced for the first time by the musical harmony flowing from the "daring first notes of song." According to Rilke, "It is our task to imprint this temporary, perishable earth into ourselves so deeply, so painfully and passionately, that its essence can rise again, 'invisibly,' inside us. We are the bees of the invisible. We wildly collect the honey of the visible, to store it in the great golden hive of the invisible."
Who, if I cried out, would hear me among the angels'
hierarchies? and even if one of them pressed me
suddenly against his heart: I would be consumed
in that overwhelming existence. For beauty is nothing
but the beginning of terror, which we are still just able to endure,
and we are so awed because it serenely disdains
to annihilate us. Every angel is terrifying.
And so I hold myself back and swallow the call-note
of my dark sobbing. Ah, whom can we ever turn to
in our need? Not angels, not humans,
and already the knowing animals are aware
that we are not really at home
in our interpreted world. Perhaps there remains for us
some tree on a hillside, which every day we can take
into our vision; there remains for us yesterday's street
and the loyalty of a habit so much at ease
when it stayed with us that it moved in and never left.
Oh and night: there is night, when a wind full of infinite space
gnaws at our faces. Whom would it not remain for--that longed-after,
mildly disillusioning presence, which the solitary heart
so painfully meets. Is it any less difficult for lovers?
But they keep on using each other to hide their own fate.
Don't you know yet? Fling the emptiness out of your arms
into the spaces we breathe; perhaps the birds
will feel the expanded air with more passionate flying.
Yes--the springtimes needed you. Often a star
was waiting for you to notice it. A wave rolled toward you
out of the distant past, or as you walked
under an open window, a violin
yielded itself to your hearing. All this was mission.
But could you accomplish it? Weren't you always
distracted by expectation, as if every event
announced a beloved? (Where can you find a place
to keep her, with all the huge strange thoughts inside you
going and coming and often staying all night.)
But when you feel longing, sing of women in love;
for their famous passion is still not immortal. Sing
of women abandoned and desolate (you envy them, almost)
who could love so much more purely than those who were gratified.
Begin again and again the never-attainable praising;
remember: the hero lives on; even his downfall was
merely a pretext for achieving his final birth.
But Nature, spent and exhausted, takes lovers back
into herself, as if there were not enough strength
to create them a second time. Have you imagined
Gaspara Stampa intensely enough so that any girl
deserted by her beloved might be inspired
by that fierce example of soaring, objectless love
and might say to herself, "Perhaps I can be like her?"
Shouldn't this most ancient of sufferings finally grow
more fruitful for us? Isn't it time that we lovingly
freed ourselves from the beloved and, quivering, endured:
as the arrow endures the bowstring's tension, so that
gathered in the snap of release it can be more than
itself. For there is no place where we can remain.
Voices. Voices. Listen, my heart, as only
saints have listened: until the gigantic call lifted them
off the ground; yet they kept on, impossibly,
kneeling and didn't notice at all:
so complete was their listening. Not that you could endure
God's voice--far from it. But listen to the voice of the wind
and the ceaseless message that forms itself out of silence.
It is murmuring toward you now from those who died young.
Didn't their fate, whenever you stepped into a church
in
Or high up, some eulogy entrusted you with a mission,
as, last year, on the plaque in
What they want of me is that I gently remove the appearance
of injustice about their death--which at times
slightly hinders their souls from proceeding onward.
Of course, it is strange to inhabit the earth no longer,
to give up customs one barely had time to learn,
not to see roses and other promising Things
in terms of a human future; no longer to be
what one was in infinitely anxious hands; to leave
even one's own first name behind, forgetting it
as easily as a child abandons a broken toy.
Strange to no longer desire one's desires. Strange
to see meanings that clung together once, floating away
in every direction. And being dead is hard work
and full of retrieval before one can gradually feel
a trace of eternity. Though the living are wrong to believe
in the too-sharp distinctions which they themselves have created.
Angels (they say) don't know whether it is the living
they are moving among, or the dead. The eternal torrent
whirls all ages along in it, through both realms
forever, and their voices are drowned out in its thunderous roar.
In the end, those who were carried off early no longer need us:
they are weaned from earth's sorrows and joys, as gently as children
outgrow the soft breasts of their mothers. But we, who do need
such great mysteries, we for whom grief is so often
the source of our spirit's growth--: could we exist without them?
Is the legend meaningless that tells how, in the lament for Linus,
the daring first notes of song pierced through the barren numbness;
and then in the startled space which a youth as lovely as a god
has suddenly left forever, the Void felt for the first time
that harmony which now enraptures and comforts and helps us?
Translated by Stephen Mitchell
4 comments:
I am always surprised each time I read his work that Rilke has remained so unappreciated. I wonder if a lot of it has to do with the fact that he didn't really fit the modernist mold. I love this part in the first elegy: as the arrow endures the bowstring's tension, so that
gathered in the snap of release it can be more than
itself.
It was nice to read this again.
I think he's fairly well appreciated, (my Norton Anthology refers to him as the "best-known and most influential German poet of the twentieth century [next to David Hasselhoff]"). I think he fits well with Joyce, Faulkner, Wolfe, and T.S. Elliot, who all went to their graves with the unfulfilled dream of achieving a perfect, comprehensive vision of human existence through art. But you're right that he often takes an undeserving back seat to other writers in American college courses. In fact, I don't recall any of my college professors even acknowledging Rilke's existence. Maybe things would be different if Robert Frost had taken the road more traveled?
If we're going to talk about specific lines from the Elegies, I have to say that this section of the Ninth Elegy is astounding:
"Ah, but what can we take along
into that other realm? Not the art of looking, which is learned so slowly, and nothing that happened here. Nothing.
The sufferings, then. And above all, the heaviness,
and the long experience of love,– just what is wholly
unsayable. But later, among the stars, what good is it–they are better as they are: unsayable."
This is like crack for badly edjmacated, malcontent seekers like me.
After the first two sentences of this, I felt moved to come up with a pithy, insightful comment. Not surprising- if you know me at all, you know my penchant for vomiting unsolicited commentary in the general direction of anyone who pretends to listen.
I can't remember the last time I read something so rich, so succinct.
Maybe its because I've never even heard of Rilke, or because the last abbreviated reading summary I offered went like this:
05 January, 1995
English
"Sir Gawain wasn't afraid of the Green Knight cuz he knew he was just... like... green... and that made him different, but not really scarier".
At any rate I feel at once cheated by my relative illiteracy, and stunned by these words. Seriously-Why have I never heard of this book?
The parts each of you quoted are interesting to me. I noticed both of them, and to me they paint the polar ends of the elegies you've copied here. Greg's arrow metaphor underscores that, taken in context, we are infinitely MORE than ourselves (as we perceive ourselves).
In contrast, Patrick's part (typical, self-deprecating Patrick) illustrates that our true nature is infinitesmal - and that being simple and unfettered by our acquired perception of ourselves is what makes it so grand.
Really amazing. It makes me think about which of life's teachings really reach into eternity to us with any influence. We acknowledge our experiences with laughable superficiality, and fail to recognize the singular mission of the wave, the star, the violin. And we fail to realize our creative capacity! Be it to our benefit or detriment; to create "things" where they never existed, even where they were never intended to exist until by us.
We knot up "being" into clustered subjects of our own hallucinations, with our sole purpose being the validation of our own contrived reality. Where once they were fluid & diffuse, we intensify them until they have mass, weight, shape - meaning. We try to ascribe words (exhibit A: this post) to a truth so pure it can only be felt.
I remember trying to write "poetry" as a kid, with the sole criterion being that I used all of the week's vocabulary words. This is what living feels like sometimes. Other times it feels like sensing your fingertips without moving them. Or knowing a light is being shone on your hand when you can't see it, and aren't expecting it.
So this is what you get for all your grassroots efforts, Pat: you get to introduce neophytes to Rilke (by the way, what is "modernism"?), and then hear them ramble like someone given their first "free association" assignment in Creative Writing class. If only I had taken any classes of that sort in my half of a college education - the road we are all supposed to have taken. But I- I took the one less travelled by...........
Please accept my unspeakable (nay- unsayable) thanks for sharing this with us.
Eric
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